mergeritter's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Team Rainbow Rocket grunt commission]

can't thank ya enough for this comm bro she's perfect 😍

jinusenpai responds:

im glad you found it on here ! and no problem bro thanks again again hahaha

[Sunflower and Sunshine]

A cute drawing :D

If i can offer constructive criticism, Hibiki's eyelashes seem wider than Miku's, so watch out for that. They make Hibiki's eyes bigger by comparison. And watch out for those pointy fingers, too.

ladyinverse responds:

never heard of nails? jk jk, thank you! <3

i was always bad at the pointy finger thing lol.

[Sleepy Sheep]

I'm liking the face and the boob and tanktop strap physics.
Thank you again for the gift effie!

ladyinverse responds:

thank YOU mergy!! i'm glad you liked it <3

[Sandalphon VKS]

Damn he looks good 👌 Arc of the back looks a bit long and straight, tho. One of my favorites from you regardless :)

ladyinverse responds:

ooh i can see what you mean. thank you!

[Aranea DLC]

Idea is good, but I think it could have been executed a bit better. Maybe a lower squat to emphasize the butt, and have her turned more so that we can see a bit more of her face?

ladyinverse responds:

thanks! this pose was sorta hard for me since it was from a different angle than i'm use to. ^^

[Menhera: Mint]

Pastel colors are cute, and I like the colored lines. But, the hands seem a bit small, I don't know if it's because of the baggy clothes or not.

ladyinverse responds:

the hand is intentionally small, sortof meant to exaggerate a little. ^^

[Meet Taffeta]

She's definitely a cutie! Love the hairstyle, and the face is cute too. Ankles are clearly defined, and the paws look good

ladyinverse responds:

I've defeated the ankles! thank you! ^^ <3

[Glasses Allenby]

Pose, coloring, and shading are good. But, I'm not sure about that type of big, cartoony smile for this anime art style. It's a little distracting from the rest of the drawing.

ladyinverse responds:

i do agree a little hah; doing this sortof expression was an experiment at the time. but thank you!

[After the workout]

Good attempt at abdomen muscles, and the pose really does convey the "after workout vibe." But, arms look a bit short; they should be around the same length as the length from shoulders to the waist. If the drink is going towards her mouth, the right hand should be going tilting towards, not tilting away from her, if you see what I mean. Neck also seems a bit too long.

ladyinverse responds:

thank you! i'll be sure to add that to my notes. ^_^

[Bunny Aqua]

Expression is cute, boobies look good, and the pose accentuates her body. But her left foot seems too bent. Also, make sure you draw distinctive ankles!

ladyinverse responds:

those darn ankles! thank you for the input! <3